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4月14日托福獨立寫作真題范文:當今的學生不尊敬老師了?

2019-04-23 15:24     供稿單位: 新航道     原創作者:章躍    

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  4月14日托福獨立寫作題目

  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.”

  

  寫作范文

  Introduction  

  不太“俗套”的套路(用if引導的條件狀語從句引出題目中的信息: If I am told that our students are less respectful to their teachers than were their parents or grandparents, 然后主句的部分說自己同意與否): I can hardly disagree. 如果一個題目真的讓你有感而發,那么在開頭段落里可以多一些內容: A recent case is that one of my peer teachers was threatened by an “at-risk” student, and, fearing the student’s harassment, she had to apologize for her discipling, which was a normal requirement that students must put away their phones during the class. Ironic as it is, this case may not be surprising.

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  harassment

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  【Body】Para.1

  The case mentioned above may seem extreme, where the student’s act may even violate the law, analogous cases actually happen on a daily basis across the country. 完全可以用例證法來撐起一整個段落(也就是說,就不講道理了,就舉例子就好): I was, on the other day, alerted to a pop-up headline that reads “student hurls insults at teacher”. Knowing that the teacher was simply reminding the student to dress properly, I was prepared for the rest of the story that the student insulted the teacher for the teacher’s proper way of wearing clothes was “poor”, “peasant-like” and “inferior”. 然后,與過往的情況比較一下,這是“今昔對比”話題的典型內容:This contrasts sharply with the days where my parents were students. When the teachers asked them to tuck their shirts nicely, they would not defy the teachers despite the fashion need, which suggests the untucked hem. During the good old days, being respectful was above being fashionable.

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  【Body】Para. 2  

  In fairness, it would be biased if we blame our students. Some of them, those who have no intent to insult anyone, those whose offense was not deliberate, do not deserve the accusation. In fact, it is the modernized learning that makes the lack of respect. When students today have easier access to the greater scope of information, easier and greater than their teachers, they can hardly remain humble and obedient.賣個關子,后面的展開略。

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  Conclusion  

  Our students are not as respectful to their teachers as were their parents or grandparents. Although I can hardly disagree, I cannot attribute this situation solely to their own problem.

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  solely

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